Thursday, April 23, 2020

Introduction
Friends or family. Do you like your friends that play with you at school or your family that spend time with you after school. In my opinion, I think that family is more important but everyone may not agree.

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I strongly think that family is more important. Friends are important, playing with you helping you and lots more stuff(especially best friends). Though family is, even more, they look out for you all the time and support you. Of course, they love you and they are people you can rely on throughout your life. They are always there for you if you’re going through hard times they can help you with you’re issues. Whereas with friends you may not feel comfortable with sharing your thought openly. You might feel shy to express your ideas.

Paragraph 2( Bonding with your family with religions)
With your family, you have a special bond with them. Especially when it comes to cultural beliefs. For example, not all people celebrate Christmas, Easter or Halloween but some do. These beliefs might not be shared with friends. You might do some rituals that only your Family does whereas your friend’s families might not have that same ritual. So you might not feel like sharing it with your friends.


Paragraph 3 (how family support you and help you)
Heres another reason why family is more important. They support you, for example, say you have a test coming and you very stressed your parents can help you with the questions. Another reason is they help you with things so that you won’t struggle with doing them. They can also help you when you get sick or are not feeling well by giving you medicine.


Conclusion 
Overall parents and family are the most important thing to, everyone. They are amazing !!!!












1 comment:

  1. Anoushka, I think you have listed some great, effective reasons about the important role family holds in our lives. I also like how you introduced different sentence starters and conjunctions to add detail to your writing. Next time, check that you have used commas and apostrophes correctly to make your meaning clear.

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