Wednesday, July 31, 2019

my setting description writing island paradise



Anoushka - 


Paragraph 1 atmosphere


Paragraph 2-touch,texture
Paragraph 3 -smell ,hear
Sum up the overall feeling

paragraph 1
The tropical paradise looked idyllic and mesmerizing it was a calm and peaceful day.The water was
 as clear as glass.The island was isolated and remote.A fish on the sea shore smelt like ghastly rotten eggs.the sand was as hot as a burning barbecue .The clouds looked like cotton candy in a candy shop.people were sitting under umbrellas drinking refreshing cocktails and reading books  people were tanning under the sun like a toaster bronzing bread.The sun reflected off the water like  an image reflecting off a mirror.there was a small deck on which people could fish from and it was made of wood at the end was a little seat.Just behind the sand were lush green trees which looked like broccoli


The fishing deck was as smooth as fabric and the sand  felt soft and grainy.The water felt as thick as molasses, yet slipperier than ice.Trees surrounded the Island and  felt soft and pokey.The umbrella looked torn because of the sun's rays.The log which was under the water was rough on the outside and soft on the inside.

The water smelt so salty.birds were chirping as if they were singing a song.the water was gently swaying and lapping over the sand.When people walked the sand made a crunching sound.the seagulls kept saying quack,quack,quack,quack.

Overall the place was exquisite and a fun place to go to.There were lots of things to do like sit under umbrellas,sunbathe,swim,play in the water and go fishing

1 comment:

  1. I love how you used deatil but next time use sophiscated words

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